Monday, March 26, 2007

Jameela's Short Story

A very long time ago there was a girl named Jordan. Jordan was a teenager, the type of person that someone would typically call stuck up. In her eyes, she loved everyone and just wanted to fit it. She rocked the latest and new the latest. She enjoyed spoken word and arguing, however no one knew this side of her. She was only known as Jordan, the most popular girl at school, who never wore the same outfit twice and who was rich.
She never really realized how fake she was until after her car accident when she realized how short life is. The car accident was during her last semester of her senior year. She attended Roosevelt high in New York. She was coming out of her last period and noticed the bulletin board and saw the words “APPLY TO COLLEGE”. Her entire senior year she didn’t even think about college. She barely knew the process and the benefits of attending college. The reason for this was because her mom and all her friends told her that she wasn’t going to college but she was too marry Josh Carter.
Josh Carter was her boyfriend. He attended Roosevelt High 2 years ago. He currently went to New York State and was soon to be drafted by the hornets. He was also known as the MPG, most popular guy at school.
After the accident and her senior year she finally realized this was not the life she wanted and realized that a lot of high school students are like that. She took all this opinion and thoughts of high school life that she was so upset and decided to start a high school speak program to inform students on college and life.

2 comments:

Jameela said...

There was a good message and I liked the word choice. I like the idea of you having the most popular girl. The story was catchy because of her age and I like the background information inside the beginning middle and end.

Estefanie Paje said...

the story had a really good concept... but it seemed really rushed. Don't be afraid to prolong it... add details.