Part 1
I enjoy to lie. Seeing people be completely bamboozled by something so completely easy to do just makes me feel superior. I guess the real issue is that I have an inferiority complex. So, lying feeds my ego. I like to do a lot of things that aren’t necessarily moral that make me feel better about myself. Doesn’t everyone do that in one way or another?
Part 2
I guess that I’ve always seen lying as an okay thing to do, probably because I’ve always lived in the city. You see people lie every day. I cities, morals aren't so important, but more so, being successful. That's all I've ever cared about.
Part 3
I was born July 24, 1989, an only child. My family is very small, my mom, me, and no one else. I’ve never really had any trouble with life, or at least no trouble that everyone else hasn’t had. In fact, I’ve probably had life a lot easier than most kids my age, I’m an only child. That’s not to say that all only-child’s get it easy, I mean, its not a stereotype that you can hold everyone to.
Part 4
When I was younger, I never really had very many friends. I never really had friends until late high school. So, when I was little I always ended up doing things with computers. You don’t need friends to use computers and electronics. So, I became a nerd, which probably fueled me not having friends. Eventually, being a nerd became boring, so, I started spending time around this mechanic I knew.
Part 5
This mechanic was a drunk, and probably wasn’t the best influence on me, but at the time, it was good because it got me away from being a nerd. It also got me into cars, although I don’t ever talk about my love of cars. I spent so much time with this mechanic, that I knew every part of a car, or at least every part of most old cars. I probably don’t anymore though, I haven’t talked to him, or any other mechanic in years.
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Hoc 1: Your paragraph was good, but talk a little more about why you lie...expand on it.
Loc 1: The only error is in the beginning. You should write "become completely..."
Hoc 2: What do you mean when you write "Thats all I've ever cared about."
Loc 1: You need to put In cities not I cities.
Hoc 3: You contradict yourself a lot in this. Focus on one main thought an write more.
Loc 3: Write any trouble, not no trouble.
Hoc 4: Expand on the mechanic and on how you feel about not having friends. Jason you aren't writing enough...i feel that you are only writing the beginning of a paragraph and ending it with a whole new idea.
Loc 4: "...really had very many friends;" this sunds weird, please change it.
Hoc 5: Tell me more about your personal relationship with him and why you looked up to him.
Loc 5: This paragraph was good.
Excellent job overall!!
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