Thursday, March 8, 2007

Stephanie's How To:

How to Make Your Hair Shiny, Soft, and Healthy
step 1: Wash your hair every day, preferably at night.
A) Use a good brand of shampoo that you bought at a beauty supply store or a hair salon.
B) Next put on conditioner which should also be a good brand and leave in hair for at least 5 minutes. Rinse with warm water.
C) After, Comb out hair and towel dry as best as you can.
D) Apply a large amount of Paul Mitchell green apple Super Skinny Serum into damp hair. Comb through hair gently and rub on the ends of hair as well.
E) In the morning after hair has dried apply another coat of the serum and style as usual.
Reminders:
Don't use products that are tested on animals....They will not only make you a cruel person but your hair will look ugly as well.
Always brush your hair at every chance you get.
Remember curly hair is not that bad....but straight hair does make it look more sleek.
Use the serum whenever you can....you should be exepecting to buy a new bottle at least every three weeks.

1 comment:

GField said...

HOC:
Perhaps in step A you could name a particular brand of shampoo that you think works well.

In step D it would be helpful to name a few places where you could purchase Paul Mitchell green apple Super Skinny Serum.

I liked how you including in your reminders section to not use products tested on animals, even if your threat of ugly hair is probably not true.

LOC:
There weren’t many grammar or spelling mistakes. In the reminder section where you say the serum will make your hair “more sleek”, you should say the serum will make your hair sleeker instead. In the last section you also spelt expecting wrong.